Alright, read this bit of a potential short novel; particularly you young adults. Be kind.Any good? Want more?

This is really good. U said this was a short story? are u sure? it seems like it could be a good book. really it could. i really like your characters. idk about everyone else but i really like this. i think you should continue with this story. I believe it will be a good read when it is finished. Good Job